Your getting better at this.
Your framing and visuals are getting alot better from the beginning.
I do agree with "Frankafus-Studios" this does seem a bit too much Brackenwood inspired. The forest, characters, even the bugs looked similar. It's good to have some inspiration but there have been a few movies very similar to this on NG.
Don't get me wrong it's a great flash and I'd rather see something like this than another god awful Mario Sprite or clock movie (although they are starting to get better but thats another story).
The framing, animation, sound and style all seemed great. I loved the little interactive machine at the end for the replay button!
I'll definately watch the next one!
Comic Book Style
To the guy before who said about reading and the gun blam. The author was obviously going for a comic book style animation.
Not bad. The music got a little annoying I'd add maybe a bit more ambient sound to drown it out a little.
haha yea dude!
You Stupid fucks
Average Newgrounds viewer = So stupid it scares me
This is obviously a joke as if you cant tell that. Its funny in the respect that the majority of newgrounds viewers think this is totally serious.
With insta posts of 0 and "OMG U RUINED IT OMG".
So funny guys lol.
/sigh @ pre posting
This was meant to be part of a series that is to be released by a whole heap of newground artists (some more talented then others) and the person who thought up the idea was meant to release theirs first (with the artist he is fighting) to put the series off to a good start.
These guys just went and posted theirs anyway, which is kinda dissapointing and also gave it a really bad start. They didn't even use the high quality template (which may have been good) and didn't explain what the fuck is happening. I knew what was going on but for people outside battlegrounds well they would be confused as fuck.
However there will be many quality pieces coming up. Some of luis's work looks great and this piece will probably be my best finished work so far.
whirlguy wanted to post it early it's allhis fault i was like we gotta wait for luis and he was like hey send it in now go on we're finished and i was like noooooo but he sent it in anyway :(
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